13 Examples of Professional Email Subject Lines

13 professional email subject line archetypes for selling business products

If you could, you’d hire a professional email subject line writer. You would, because you depend on your email list to sell magazine subscriptions or ads to advertisers, so smashing together 50-100 characters on the fly every day is a stinky approach to accomplishing those goals.

And let’s not forget that email subject lines typically double as blog titles, Tweets and the clickable links in Facebook posts. If you’re catering a business audience like we are, they also double as Linkedin headlines.

Speaking to professionals through email is more arduous than trying to sweet-talk consumers. Consumers subscribe to emails because they want to, whereas professionals subscribe to a B2B email newsletter because they need to — likely for their job. Not to mention, selling a $10 product to Joe Jones is a heck of a lot easier sell than a $995 ticket to a conference to Sally Jones, who requires approval—sometimes even a meeting—for big purchases.

That’s why writing great professional email subject lines is so important.

This is true even if you only write a few good ones and repeat them over and over again. It seems like repeating the same phrases would tire people out, right? You’d think so, but only recently was I finally able to beat our “make money online” headlines, and only by a pinch.

See, we always test our own professional email subject lines. In the past, the term “make money online” has performed well for us. No matter how many times we’ve tested, nine times out of 10, the “make millions” or “make money online” subject line wins. Here are some reigning champions, who have won against the others I’ve thrown up against them. Our first place winner, by the way, the often-repeated, tried and true version, wins frequently against our second place subject line, but not all the time.

  • How to Make Millions with a Content-Driven Website – first place
  • Wanted: Independent, Ambitious Publishers to Make Millions of Dollars – second place

The challenge: You might find it to be a gimmicky headline, but using the phrase “making millions” or “make millions” in our subject line wins all the time. So, what I’m saying is… if you’re sick of seeing it, blame yourselves for clicking! Just kidding. Instead, I challenge you to come up with something better!

Professional Email Subject Line Examples

Professional email subject lines can come in all different types of formulas. We’ve written the “make millions” subject line at least 13 different ways. If it turns out that there isn’t a more lucrative phrase out there, then I’ll have to get really creative. For a bit of juice, and for your own inspiration, let’s see how this winning phrase works in our favorite email subject line formulas:

Reason Why:

  • 10 Reasons Why Niche Publishing Is Where You’ll Make Millions

Benefit:

  • Make Millions by Year Five

Question:

  • Did You Ever Think These 10 Niche Publishers Would Make Millions?

Testimonial

  • The American Ceramic Society Made Millions After Attending This Event

How-To:

  • How to Make Millions with a Content-Driven Website  (our current winner)

News:

  • Rupert Murdoch Made $28.9 Million Last Year, Did You?

Fascination:

  • Discover the Amazing Secrets of Making Money Online

Targeted:

  • What Every Publisher Must Know About Making Money Online in 2018

List:

  • 14 Ways to Make Millions Online

Intriguing Promise:

  • The Easiest Way to Make Millions Online in Publishing

Teaser:

  • If You’re Not Making Millions Online, You’re Going Out of Business

Command:

  • Make Millions Online

Urgency:

  • Last Chance This Year to Attend This Event and Make Millions

You can read more about each of these email subject lines, or you can come up your best shot at knocking “making millions” out of the running.

Do you need help marketing your publishing business? If so, please schedule a time to chat with us to talk more about how we can help you increase your online audience, revenue and profits

This post was originally published in 2012 and is frequently updated according to our best practices.

Comments

    Thanks a lot for the post on Examples of Professional Email Subject Lines. This is very helpful for a newbie like me.

    Reply

    I read the the word millions, million were spam alert words.

    Please advise.

    Thanks,
    Rick

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    Amanda M.

    Hi Rick, we haven’t gotten bagged for it yet, it really depends on your email sender score (reputation). We even get away with using the word “free” once in a while, although I’d recommend checking in on yours before trying it out! Your ESP might have this information, but I believe you can also find out here: https://www.senderscore.org/

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    Apparently, publishers are interested in figuring out how to use the Internet to make money and sell stuff… who knew? 😉

    Reply

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